# Citrus House Venue Rental Agreement — Redline Analysis (v1.0)

**Source (original):** `CitrusHouse/Blank 3.pdf` (4 pages, effective-dated May 19, 2026)
**Corrected template:** `app/templates/venue-rental.counterparty.v1.1.json`
**Variant:** *Counterparty paper — objective fixes only.* Deal terms were
**deliberately not renegotiated**; only objective drafting defects, internal
contradictions, ambiguities, and likely-unenforceable mechanics were corrected.
**This is not legal advice.** Section 5 lists exposures left intact that
warrant counsel review before signing.

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## 0. Quick-reference table

| # | Issue | Type | Status in v1.1 |
|---|-------|------|----------------|
| 1 | Force Majeure clause garbled (duplicated + spliced across pp.2–3) | Drafting error | **Fixed** |
| 2 | "No ADR" vs. "Attorneys' Fees" arbitration contradiction | Internal contradiction | **Fixed** |
| 3 | Cancellation tier gap (days 9–8 unclassified) + ambiguous wording | Drafting error / ambiguity | **Fixed** |
| 4 | "The balance of the Rental Fee" with no deposit/advance defined | Drafting error (dangling antecedent) | **Fixed** |
| 5 | Percentage cancellation logically void when fee = % of ticket sales | Latent logical defect | **Fixed (structural)** |
| 6 | `("'Agreement")` stray apostrophe | Typo | **Fixed** |
| 7 | "any loss **of** damage" (Termination) | Typo | **Fixed** |
| 8 | "the Lessees, invitees, representatives" (Indemnification) | Garbled enumeration | **Fixed** |
| 9 | Program named "Dragon World Nature School Classes" | Defined-term / naming | **Fixed** (now "7ABCs Summer program" / "the Program") |
| 10 | Termination self-help: "using such force as may be necessary… without… resort to legal process" | Likely-unenforceable mechanic | **Corrected** (disclosed — see §4) |
| 11 | One-sided indemnification; no insurance/COI; "as-is"; no-mediation | Substantive deal terms | **Left intact by design** — see §5 |

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## 1. Drafting errors (real problems)

### 1.1 Force Majeure — garbled, duplicated, truncated across pages 2–3

**Original (verbatim, spanning the page 2→3 break):**

> "…The excused party shall use reasonable efforts under the circumstances to
> avoid or remedy such causes of nonperformance and shall proceed to perform
> with reasonable dispatch whenever such causes are removed or ceased. An act
> or omission shall be deemed" **[page break]** "within the reasonable control
> of a party if committed, omitted, or caused by such party, civil authority,
> or by national emergencies, insurrections, riots, or wars, or strikes,
> lock-outs, work stoppages, or other labor disputes, or supplier failures.
> The excused party shall use reasonable efforts under the circumstances to
> avoid or remedy such causes of nonperformance and shall proceed to perform
> with reasonable dispatch whenever such causes are removed or ceased. An act
> or omission shall be deemed within the reasonable control of a party if
> committed, omitted, or caused by such party, or its employees, officers,
> agents, or affiliates."

**The problem.** Three defects compounded:
1. The sentence *"The excused party shall use reasonable efforts… removed or
   ceased."* appears **twice**.
2. The sentence *"An act or omission shall be deemed within the reasonable
   control of a party…"* appears **twice**, the first time **truncated
   mid-sentence** ("…shall be deemed" / page break).
3. A fragment of the Force-Majeure event list ("civil authority, or by
   national emergencies, insurrections, riots, or wars, or strikes,
   lock-outs, work stoppages, or other labor disputes, or supplier failures")
   is **re-spliced into the middle** of the "deemed within the reasonable
   control" sentence, where it does not belong.

The net effect is a clause that does not parse as English and whose
operative "reasonable control" definition is buried inside duplicated text —
exactly the kind of ambiguity a counterparty exploits in a dispute.

**v1.1 fix.** One clean, single clause. Each sentence appears once, in
logical order, ending with a single, well-formed definition:

> "…The excused party shall use reasonable efforts under the circumstances
> to avoid or remedy such causes of nonperformance and shall proceed to
> perform with reasonable dispatch whenever such causes are removed or
> ceased. An act or omission shall be deemed within the reasonable control
> of a party if committed, omitted, or caused by such party, or its
> employees, officers, agents, or affiliates."

The duplicated sentences and the mis-spliced event-list fragment are
removed; the event list now appears exactly once, earlier in the clause.

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### 1.2 Internal contradiction — "No ADR" vs. "Attorneys' Fees"

**Original — "No Alternative Dispute Resolution":**

> "…they have considered and intentionally decided **not to include any
> alternative dispute resolution ('ADR') procedures, such as mediation or
> arbitration**, in this Agreement. Any disputes… will be resolved
> exclusively through litigation in the courts of Washington…"

**Original — "Attorneys' Fees":**

> "If a legal suit, action, or proceeding, **including arbitration**, is
> brought by any party to enforce or to interpret any provision of this
> Agreement, the prevailing party will be entitled to recover…"

**The problem.** One clause states arbitration is *intentionally excluded*
and disputes go *exclusively* to court; the very next operative clause
contemplates *"including arbitration."* A court construing the contract is
handed a direct internal contradiction over the single most consequential
procedural question — whether arbitration exists at all. This also weakens
the "No ADR" clause's stated intent ("intentionally decided").

**v1.1 fix.** The arbitration reference is struck from Attorneys' Fees so it
conforms to the No-ADR clause:

> "If a legal suit, action, or proceeding is brought by any party to enforce
> or to interpret any provision of this Agreement, the prevailing party will
> be entitled to recover… reasonable attorneys' fees."

The contract now speaks with one voice: litigation only, no arbitration.

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### 1.3 Cancellation tier gap and ambiguous wording

**Original — "Cancellation":**

> "The Lessee may cancel this Agreement at any time **up to 10 days prior**
> to the event date… **at no cost**. If the Lessee shall elect to so cancel
> this Agreement **between 7 and 4 days** prior… charged **50%**… For
> cancellations **3 days prior** to the event date… charged **100%**."

**The problem.**
- **Unclassified gap:** cancellations at **9 or 8 days** before an event
  fall into no tier — not "up to 10 days," not "between 7 and 4." The fee
  for that window is undefined.
- **Ambiguous free tier:** "at any time up to 10 days prior" can be read two
  opposite ways (≥10 days out, or *within* the final 10 days). A
  counterparty could argue either.
- **Inclusive/exclusive boundaries** ("between 7 and 4 days") are undefined
  at the endpoints (is day 7 or day 4 in or out?).

**v1.1 fix.** Continuous, gap-free, parameterized tiers (defaults 10 / 3),
with unambiguous "more than / or fewer" phrasing and a validation guard that
**blocks export if the thresholds overlap**:

> "…at any time **more than 10 days** prior… at no cost. …**10 days or
> fewer, but more than 3 days**, prior… charged 50%… **3 days or fewer**
> prior… charged 100%."

Every day before the event now maps to exactly one tier; no gap, no
endpoint ambiguity. (See also §1.4/§2 for the deeper structural fix.)

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### 1.4 "The balance of the Rental Fee" — dangling antecedent

**Original — "Rental Fee":**

> "…30% of ticket sales, plus all other charges… ('Rental Fee'). **The
> balance** of the Rental Fee shall be paid in full by the Lessee on the day
> of the Events."

**The problem.** "The balance" presupposes a prior partial payment, deposit,
or advance — **none is ever defined anywhere in the Agreement**. The clause
references the remainder of something that does not exist, leaving the
payment mechanic indeterminate (what was paid, when, and what "balance"
means).

**v1.1 fix.** A required **"Advance deposit?"** selector resolves the
antecedent both ways:
- *No advance deposit required* (Citrus House default): the word "balance"
  is removed entirely — "No advance payment, deposit, or minimum fee is
  required. The Rental Fee shall be determined from final ticket sales and
  shall become due and payable in full **at the close of the Events**."
- *Advance deposit required:* an explicit deposit amount is defined first,
  so "balance" finally has a proper antecedent — "…credited against the
  Rental Fee. **The balance**, after credit for the advance deposit, shall
  be… payable in full at the close of the Events."

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## 2. Latent logical defect (beyond the original's stylistic surface)

The original couples a **ticket-sales-only Rental Fee** with **percentage-of-
Rental-Fee cancellation penalties**. If the Lessee cancels, there are no
ticket sales, so the Rental Fee is **$0** — making "50% / 100% of the Rental
Fee" equal to **$0**. The cancellation remedy is, on the original's own
terms, **economically void**. This was latent, not visible as a typo, and is
arguably the most consequential defect.

**v1.1 fix (structural).** A **"Cancellation fee basis"** selector:
- *No cancellation fee* — states plainly why none applies (fee is
  ticket-sales-based; nothing to charge against).
- *Fixed cancellation fee (venue-required)* — a specific dollar amount the
  venue may require, framed as a good-faith estimate of the Lessor's costs,
  **not a penalty** (penalty clauses are disfavored under Washington law).
- *Percentage of Rental Fee* — the original mechanic, preserved for cases
  where a deposit/minimum exists to apply it to.

This gives 7ABCs a workable, enforceable cancellation position instead of an
illusory one.

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## 3. Typos and garbled enumerations

| Location | Original | v1.1 |
|---|---|---|
| Opening | `("'Agreement")` (stray apostrophe) | `("Agreement")` |
| Indemnification | "…contractors, **the Lessees, invitees, representatives**, in, on or about the Facility." | "…contractors, **the Lessee's invitees, or representatives**, in, on or about the Facility." |
| Termination | "…any loss **of** damage which may be occasioned…" | "…any loss **or** damage which may be occasioned…" |

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## 4. Naming / defined terms

**Original.** "…a license to use Citrus House ('Facility') for the **Dragon
World Nature School Classes** ('Events')…" — uses an inconsistent
marketing-style name as a legal defined term, and the spelling
("School") differs from the program's "Skool" branding.

**v1.1.** Per the canonical decision, legal documents use **"7ABCs Summer
program" ("the Program")**; "Dragon World Nature Skool" (marketing) is kept
out of legal text entirely. "Events" is now cleanly defined as the classes
and activities of the Program:

> "…a license to use {{facilityName}} ('Facility') for the **7ABCs Summer
> program** ('**the Program**'), the classes and activities of which
> constitute the 'Events'…"

**Disclosed substantive correction (Termination).** The original authorized
self-help expulsion "**using such force as may be necessary in the judgment
of the Lessor**… **without evidence of notice or resort to legal process**."
Self-help eviction of this kind is **likely unenforceable** and exposes the
Lessor (and bystanders) to liability under Washington law. v1.1 replaces
that mechanic with removal "**in accordance with applicable law**." This is
more than a typo fix; it is flagged here so you can accept or revisit it
with counsel. All other deal terms in Termination are unchanged.

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## 5. Substantive exposures deliberately LEFT INTACT (counsel review advised)

Because you chose the *counterparty-paper / objective-fixes-only* variant,
these were **not** changed. They are not drafting errors — they are
unfavorable but deliberate deal terms in Citrus House's paper. They remain
real exposure for a **children's** program and should be raised before
signing:

1. **Wholly one-sided indemnification.** 7ABCs indemnifies Citrus House for
   "any and all" loss, broadly enough to arguably reach Citrus House's own
   negligence. No reciprocal indemnity.
2. **No insurance / certificate-of-insurance requirement** anywhere —
   unusual given the breadth of the indemnity it would normally backstop.
3. **"As-Is" condition** with no Lessor safety representation, paired with
   the one-sided indemnity.
4. **No mediation at all.** The "No ADR" clause forecloses even non-binding
   mediation before litigation — now internally consistent (§1.2) but still
   a strategically poor default for a small nonprofit.

The `ourpaper` venue template addresses 1–4 with mutual/limited indemnity,
an insurance/COI clause, a safety representation, and a good-faith
negotiation step — for when 7ABCs offers the agreement instead of accepting
the venue's.

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## 6. How the new draft is safer to use

- **No clause parses ambiguously** where the original was garbled (§1.1).
- **The contract speaks with one voice** on arbitration (§1.2).
- **Every cancellation day is classified**, and the tool **refuses to
  export** an internally inconsistent cancellation schedule (§1.3).
- **No dangling "balance"** — payment timing is explicit and tied to the
  close of the Events on a ticket-sales basis (§1.4).
- **The cancellation remedy is economically real**, not $0-by-construction
  (§2).
- **Originals preserved.** `Blank 3.pdf` and template v1.0 are untouched and
  still selectable; this analysis is itself versioned (`_v1.0`).

*Prepared as an engineering/drafting review, not legal advice. Have
qualified Washington counsel review §5 (and the §4 Termination change)
before execution.*